Cheering, yelling, screaming
The noisy crowd
Screamed
Loudly
Over the field.
Wednesday, March 19, 2008
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4 comments:
I like the way you added the word noisy to describe the crowd.
gosh nice poem.
that croud must be screming badly
THE CROWD MIGHT BE SCREAMING FOR THIS POEM BECAUSE IT IS A AWESOME POEM. I LIKE HOW YOU ADDED THE WORD NOISY INSTED OF JUST THE CROWD.
just thinking about it makes my ears sore.
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